The Couple Next Door
Shari Lapena's 2016 novel in which a baby disappears while her parents are at a dinner party next door, having left her alone with a monitor.
- First published
- 2016
- Publisher
- Changjiang Literature Press
- Pages
- 351
- Shelf
- Thriller
- Level
- Entry
- ISBN-13
- 9780735221086
Record checked against
Only one source carried a publication date for this work, so the year is uncorroborated.
Catalogue note
- Reads as
- ReflectiveChanges how you see rather than what you do.
- Level
- Accessible / FoundationalNo prior reading assumed.
- Approach
- Theoretical
- Written for
- Readers who mean to stop at one more chapter, Newcomers to the subject
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Read this if
- You want to be kept up late, and made uneasy about who to believe.
- You want a life told honestly, at full length.
- You want a book that changes how you see things rather than what you do tomorrow.
- You are starting from scratch here and want a way in that assumes no prior reading.
The premise
Anne and Marco Conti attend a dinner party at the house next door. Their babysitter cancelled, the hosts do not want a baby present, and they leave their six-month-old daughter alone, returning every half hour to check.
At half past midnight they come home and the cot is empty.
They left the baby alone and checked every half hour, and the last check was too late.
Devmark’s reading — not a quotation from the book
The opening
The first chapter is among the most efficient in the category: a situation established, a decision made that the reader immediately recognises as a mistake, and a consequence delivered within a few pages.
The book's commercial success rests substantially on how quickly it starts. Lapena also establishes the dinner party's social dynamics in a few lines, so the reader understands exactly why the parents made a decision they should not have.
Judgement
The parents' decision invites condemnation and the novel is aware of it, using the reader's disapproval as a tool.
Anne's postnatal depression and Marco's financial difficulties are both established, and the book is interested in how quickly sympathy is withdrawn from people who have made one visible error.
Multiple suspects
Every significant character is given motive, means and something to conceal, including both parents, the neighbours and Anne's wealthy and controlling parents.
The construction is conventional and is handled competently, with each revelation eliminating one possibility and introducing another. The rotation is rapid enough that no possibility is allowed to settle, which keeps the reader from committing to a theory and then losing interest.
Detective Rasbach
The investigating officer is observant, unsentimental and openly suspicious of the parents, and his chapters supply the procedural spine.
He is a functional character rather than a developed one, and his role is to articulate the reader's suspicions and then complicate them. Lapena also uses him to supply information the parents do not have, which keeps the investigation moving when the domestic scenes stall.
Present tense
The novel is written in present tense throughout, which is a common choice in the category and produces a sense of continuous immediacy.
It also flattens the prose considerably, and Lapena's style is deliberately unobtrusive to the point of transparency. It also removes the implication of a narrator recounting events afterwards, which would carry a guarantee of survival the book does not want to give.
Pace
Very short chapters, frequent viewpoint changes and a reveal roughly every thirty pages.
It is constructed entirely for momentum and achieves it. The book can be read in a few hours and is designed to be. There is also almost no description of anything, which is a deliberate choice: the book is a sequence of events and declines to slow for any of them.
Money
Anne's family wealth, Marco's failing business and the financial dependence between them are the plot's actual engine.
The novel is better on this than on anything else: the specific humiliation of needing your wife's father's money is well observed. Anne's father in particular is drawn well, and his contempt for his son-in-law is expressed entirely through offers of assistance.
Credibility
Several developments require characters to behave in ways that strain plausibility, particularly in the final third.
The book prioritises reversal over coherence, which is a legitimate choice for the category and will frustrate readers who want the plot to hold up afterwards. Several characters also act on information they should not have, and the novel does not always account for how they obtained it.
Characterisation
The people are thin, defined largely by their secrets, and the novel does not attempt interiority beyond what the plot requires.
This is the clearest difference between Lapena and the stronger writers in this group, and it is a deliberate trade for pace. Anne's postnatal depression in particular is used as a plot mechanism more than as a condition, which is the book's least defensible decision.
The ending
It resolves the disappearance and adds a final turn in the last pages that recontextualises one relationship.
The closing device is effective and is also the point at which the novel's preference for surprise over consistency is most visible. It also leaves one thread deliberately unresolved, which Lapena has used in several subsequent books and which readers find either effective or evasive.
Who it is for
Readers who want maximum plot velocity and are untroubled by thin characterisation.
It is the most purely commercial book in this section and entirely honest about that. Readers who want the domestic thriller done with more substance should read Flynn or French instead. It was also a very substantial commercial success, and its shape has been widely copied, which makes it worth reading as a specimen of the category.
What to take away
- 01A premise that starts instantlyA recognisable mistake and its consequence are delivered within a few pages, which is most of the book's commercial success.
- 02Reader judgement used as a toolThe parents invite condemnation, and the novel is interested in how fast sympathy is withdrawn after one visible error.
- 03Money as the actual engineFamily wealth, a failing business and the humiliation of financial dependence drive the plot more than the abduction does.
- 04Reversal prioritised over coherenceSeveral late developments strain plausibility, which is a deliberate trade the category routinely makes.
- 05Characters defined by secretsInteriority is supplied only where the plot requires it, which is the clearest difference from the stronger writers here.
- 06Transparency as a stylePresent tense and unobtrusive prose flatten the writing deliberately in service of speed.
